Above the Rim, Below the proverty line

Chapter 113: Ashes in the Water


The gunshot was a living thing. It didn't just echo; it clawed its way into Kyle's ear canal and took up residence, a high-pitched, metallic shriek that vibrated through the bones of his skull. It was a bell that had been struck once, but its terrible, singular note refused to fade, drowning out the distant hum of the city and the frantic thrum of his own pulse. The world had narrowed to this concrete box, this multi-story car park that smelled of stale petrol, cold dust, and now, the sharp, acrid tang of cordite.

Across the short, deadly expanse of the parking level, Omar stood frozen. The cheap pistol in his hand seemed to have a life of its own, shaking so violently it was a miracle it hadn't already leaped from his grasp. His face, usually so full of easy laughter and bravado, was a bloodless mask of shock. Sweat beaded on his brow, slicking his skin under the harsh, unforgiving glare of the fluorescent lights overhead. His eyes were wide, saucers of pure, unadulterated disbelief, as if he were watching a movie of someone else's hand committing the act. He wasn't a killer. He was just a kid from the estate who'd talked too big and now found himself holding a reality he could never put down.

"Run, Kyle!" The shout tore from Omar's throat, raw and ragged, but it sounded muffled and distant to Kyle, filtered through the relentless ringing in his ears.

But there was no running now. The single, foolish shot had slammed a door shut on any possibility of escape. It was an announcement, a declaration of war in a conflict they were never equipped to win.

From the shadowed lee of a concrete pillar, Bolo's men moved. They didn't rush; they converged. They were predators who had just caught the coppery scent of fear in the air, and it had awakened a cold, professional hunger. They fanned out with a practiced, lethal grace, their focus entirely on Omar, the one who had dared to fire first. Their movements were silent, their expressions flat and empty, and that was more terrifying than any shouted threat.

A strong, calloused hand clamped onto the collar of Kyle's jacket and yanked him backward, behind the relative safety of a rust-speckled sedan. Derrick's face was inches from his own, his features carved from granite and shadow. A long, pale scar along his jawline seemed to gleam in the low light. His eyes, the same shade of hazel as Kyle's, were not wide with fear, but narrow and darting, calculating angles, counting adversaries, measuring the scant few feet between them and a bloody end.

"Fool!" Derrick hissed, the word a venomous puff of air. He risked a glance over the hood of the car, his jaw muscles clenching into hard knots. "That boy… he ain't built for this." There was no malice in the statement, only a grim, awful truth. Omar had heart, a loyal, fierce heart that had brought him here tonight to stand by his friend. But heart was a soft thing. It bruised. It broke. It didn't stop bullets.

Bolo himself stepped forward now, emerging from the gloom like a shark gliding into shallow water. He was a big man, his bulk solid, not soft, and he moved with a menacing confidence that spoke of a lifetime of enforced respect. A gold tooth glinted as his lips peeled back into a smirk that held no warmth, no humor.

"Wrong move, bwoy," Bolo's voice was a low, rumbling tremor that seemed to vibrate through the concrete floor. "Now everybody dead." He didn't shout. He didn't need to. The finality in his tone was absolute.

The second shot cracked the world in two again. This one was different from Omar's panicked, wild discharge. It was controlled, precise, and horrifyingly effective. It wasn't a warning; it was a statement of intent.

Omar jerked as if yanked by an invisible wire, a choked gasp escaping his lips. The bullet tore into his side, just above his hip, and the force of it spun him halfway around. The pistol, now a useless, guilty weight, clattered to the asphalt, skittering away under a car. His legs, suddenly incapable of supporting him, folded. He went down hard, his knees buckling, one hand flailing out to slap against the cold ground, the other clutching at the blossoming, dark stain on his hoodie. His eyes, wide with a new, shocking kind of pain, scanned the chaos until they found Kyle's. And in that look, across the few yards that might as well have been a continent, Kyle saw everything. The stark, animal fear. The deep, gut-wrenching regret for the mistake that had brought them here. But underneath it all, shining through the agony, was a fierce, unbreakable love. A brother's love.

"Omar!" Kyle's scream was ripped from a place so deep inside him he didn't know it existed. He tried to surge forward, to get to his friend, but Derrick's arm was an iron bar across his chest, holding him down behind the relative safety of the car.

"Stay low, you idiot!" Derrick growled, his voice a harsh whisper against Kyle's ear. "You move now, you dead too! You hear me? You die right next to him! Is that what you want?" His eyes were blazing, not with anger, but with a desperate, frantic need to keep this one thing, this one person, safe.

Another shot split the air, this one pinging off the hood of their sedan, leaving a neat, dark hole. Derrick's response was instantaneous. He rose just high enough, a swift, fluid motion born of a past he'd tried to leave behind, and fired back. His own pistol, a heavier, more brutal weapon, flashed and roared in the confined space. The report was deafening. One of Bolo's men, the one on the left, grunted, a sound of pure surprise. He looked down at the new, dark flower blooming in the center of his stomach, his weapon dropping from suddenly numb fingers before he crumpled to the ground, clutching himself.

But it was a temporary victory. A drop of water on a forest fire.

Bolo and his other man, enraged by the loss, opened fire together. The world dissolved into a deafening storm of noise and violence. The car Kyle hid behind shuddered and rocked under the impact. The windshield exploded into a million crystalline pebbles that rained down over them like deadly hail. The side windows followed suit. Metal doors dented and pinged as rounds punched through them, tearing up the upholstery inside. The air grew thick and hazy with the smell of gunpowder, burned rubber, and shattered glass.

Derrick cursed, a long, fluent stream of words Kyle had never heard him use. He was calculating, and the math was bad. They were pinned. Outgunned. Out of time. In one decisive movement, he grabbed Kyle by the collar again, not with anger, but with a terrifying urgency, and shoved him bodily toward a narrow gap between their battered sedan and a large SUV parked next to it.

"Run, Kyle! NOW! That way! Don't stop! Don't look back!"

But Kyle's legs were leaden, rooted to the oil-stained concrete. He couldn't run. Not while Omar lay twitching on the ground, his breath coming in wet, ragged gasps, his fingers straining toward the gun that lay just inches from his grasp—a useless talisman. Not while Derrick, the ghost who had haunted his childhood, the father he had cursed and missed and hated in equal measure, now stood up into the storm of bullets, making himself the biggest target, a human shield.

"Dad—!" The word was out of Kyle's mouth before he could stop it, a child's plea emerging from a young man's terror.

Derrick heard it. He paused for a fraction of a second, half-turned. And his look… it wasn't the hardened glare of a gangster. It was fierce, yes, but there was a tenderness there Kyle had never seen, a lifetime of regret and a single, defining purpose crystallized in that one glance. The noise, the chaos, the dying—it all seemed to fade for a heartbeat.

"I ain't been no father to you, son," Derrick said, his voice surprisingly calm, cutting cleanly through the gunfire. "But tonight… tonight I die as one."

Then he turned away. He stepped into the open, away from the cover of the car, and raised his weapon. He didn't crouch. He didn't seek cover. He simply stood, a final, defiant monument, and unloaded the rest of his clip toward Bolo.

The world didn't just slow; it fractured into a series of frozen, hellish tableaus.

Kyle saw Derrick's first shot take the remaining henchman clean in the forehead. The man's head snapped back, and he dropped like a sack of stones.

He saw Bolo stumble, crying out as a bullet grazed his arm, tearing through his expensive jacket and drawing a line of fire across his bicep.

He saw Omar, on the ground, gasping, trying to crawl, leaving a smeared trail of dark blood on the asphalt.

Then the final volley came. Bolo, roaring in fury and pain, and the driver of the SUV who had now joined the fight, fired together. The bullets tore into Derrick's chest, a brutal stitching of impacts that punched the air from his lungs. His body jerked violently, a macabre dance. Blood misted the air behind him, painting the side of the car in a grotesque abstract. The empty gun fell from his hand, clattering to the ground. He didn't cry out. He just staggered, his legs refusing to quit even as his life fled him. For a moment, he stood, swaying, then his knees buckled and he crashed down onto them, before finally pitching forward onto his face.

"NOOOO!" Kyle's scream was a raw, animal thing, torn from the very core of his being. It was a sound of utter desolation, the sound of a world ending.

Bolo walked forward, clutching his wounded arm, his face a contorted mask of fury and pain. He stopped by Derrick's still form. With a contemptuous kick of his boot, he rolled the body over. Derrick's sightless eyes stared up at the fluorescent lights. "Street debts always get paid," Bolo spat, the words dripping with venom. "And your boy next."

Kyle's breath froze in his lungs. The world shrank to the dark, circular void at the end of Bolo's gun as it swung toward him. He could see the intricate machining inside the barrel. It was the last thing he would ever see.

But then, a new sound pierced the oppressive, death-filled silence of the car park. It started as a faint whine, then grew into a piercing, two-toned wail. Sirens. Lots of them. They were still distant, but they were coming fast, cutting through the night, growing louder with every passing second.

Bolo's head snapped up. He cursed, vicious and succinct. He glared at Kyle, then at the entrance ramp, torn between finishing the job and saving his own skin. Self-preservation won. "Grab him! Move!" he barked at his driver, gesturing toward his own wounded arm. The driver rushed to the downed henchman with the stomach wound, hauling him up with a grunt. They dragged him toward the black SUV, bundled him inside. Bolo took one last, long look at the carnage—at Derrick's body, at Omar's still form, at Kyle frozen on his knees—before spitting on the ground and climbing into the passenger seat. The engine roared, tires screaming and smoking as the vehicle peeled out, tearing down the ramp and leaving behind only the smell of burned rubber, spent casings, and the thick, coppery stench of blood.

The sirens were deafening now, their blue lights already reflecting off the concrete pillars, painting the scene in frantic, rhythmic strokes of electric blue.

Kyle scrambled on his hands and knees across the rough, cold pavement, ignoring the glass that bit into his palms. He grabbed Omar's hand. It was already growing cold. His friend's lips were stained a shocking, vibrant red, a cruel parody of the candy he was always eating. His breathing was a shallow, hiccupping thing, each inhalation a desperate, failing struggle.

"Stay with me, bro. Please! They're coming! The ambulance is coming!" Kyle begged, his voice cracking, tears finally cutting hot paths through the grime on his cheeks. He pressed his own hand over the wound in Omar's side, trying to stem the tide, but the warmth of his friend's life seeped relentlessly between his fingers.

Omar's chest rose once, a shallow, shuddering movement. His eyes, glazing over, managed to find Kyle's one last time. There was so much he wanted to say. A lifetime of conversations they would never have. All of it condensed into a single, breathless whisper, a faint cloud of air on the cold night.

"Live… for both of us…"

The light behind his eyes went out. The tension left his hand. And he went still.

The sirens reached a crescendo, and then were abruptly cut off as cars screeched to a halt on the levels below. Doors slammed. Voices shouted, hard and authoritative. Boots pounded on concrete, coming closer.

But Kyle didn't see the armed officers fanning into the area, their weapons drawn. He didn't feel the hands that eventually grabbed him, pulling him gently but firmly away from his friend's body. He didn't hear the questions, the shouts of "Clear!" and "Medic!".

All he saw was the blood. Two separate pools, one under the man who had given him life, one under the brother who had made that life worth living. They began to seep toward each other across the asphalt, mingling in the cracks.

All he felt was the cold, absolute truth settling deep inside his bones, a frost that he knew would never, ever thaw.

Ghosts don't stay buried. And now, he was living in a world made entirely of them.

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