Why hello my fellow adventurers! Like I said in a previous chapter like this, I will try to keep you guys updated whenever I make huge corrections or retcons to my story. For today, I have alot of updates to list, since I went ahead and edited almost EVERY chapter, over 210,000+ Words, with my current writing style.

Along the way, I fixed countless grammatical errors, changed the style of certain paragraphs, added small character specific actions to make them feel more unique—and most importantly, made some retcons here and there. Overall, the story hasn't really changed, just that I've added more "substance" to the earlier chapters to better setup future chapters/plot points for future readers. Below is a provided list of all the major changes I made whilst editing.

Chapters with massive changes/overhauls:

All Chapters: Changed Nina's name to Nini / Changed Kima's name to Kiara / Changed Captain Damian to Executioner Seton / Changed Briarwood to Briarstone

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Extra Chapter 27: Added a scene with Moa Yono & more dialogue to Caera Goten

Extra Chapter 35: Added more dialogue to Liam Leir & Himon Koul

Chapters 21-23: Changed Mystigo Aellekage and Kiara Juryoku's tone & dialogue (Mystigo acted a bit too much like Dama before)

And with that, that's all folks! As I've said before, I will continue to both improve my writing/storytelling skills and also keeping you all updated on any changes I make. I want all of us to be on the same page! If you want to go back and experience these chapters with a fresh breath of life breathed into them, be my guest, and please make sure to comment if my writing had either improved or worsened! Your input is very much appreciated!

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