Respec On Death

Update / Changelog


Dear Readers,

This is something I meant to post before the start of book two, apologies!

During the final edit of ROD a few things were changed, I will update RR chapters sometime this month to reflect the changes as well. None of the changes were major, just small tweaks here and there. The largest change is that the final draft had a professional editor do a double pass on it. She is awesome and the finished product is much better.

Changes for Respec On Death:

Made the intelligence debuff more obvious and questioned by Jimmy at a few moments in the story, as well as being mentioned by Mira in their first encounter. Also during the initial Respec process it is in one of the Red text boxes.

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Changed the "Deviant" title / role to be from a purple system admin and not Red.

Instead of deviants for Earth's opposition, it has been changed to be Marauders. Which means the role that Red gave Jimmy is now called Marauder. I think it plays better, and makes more sense in the long run, given that their goals are to help conquer worlds not defend them.

Adjusted his tone slightly in earlier chapters, made him less whiny.

Changed the section after the Emperor Dragonfly quest where it made it seem like it wasn't partly his fault. Instead changing it to them trying to lie to him and say it wasn't his fault to save his feelings, however he knew it was, at least in part.

If you have any suggestions for book two, feel free to leave them, I try to read every comment and review. Thank you for your patience, hopefully the changes will improve the over all story. Anyway, have a great day!

Respectfully,

Godric

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