Razors Edge: Sci Fi Progression

Bk 2 - Chapter 5 - First Treatment


"I can see you're steadier on your feet," Dr. Chen noted.

"A little," I replied, though each step still required a huge amount of conscious effort. According to Doli's monitoring, the nanites had improved my motor control by approximately 15%, but I still felt like I was operating borrowed machinery.

NEURAL RECONSTRUCTION - PHASE 2 INITIATION:

Motor Function Recovery: +15% [IMPROVED PRECISION AND CONTROL]

Sensory Recalibration: ACTIVE [TASTE/VISION DISTORTIONS EXPECTED]

Memory Pathway Activation: UNEXPECTED [DORMANT CONNECTIONS AWAKENING]

This treatment chamber resembled something between a medical theater and a quantum research laboratory. Curved walls rose nearly ten meters overhead, lined with neural monitoring equipment that could barely contain the energy powering it. The floor beneath my feet was polished metal, inscribed with conductive pathways that glowed faintly blue in the ambient lighting.

Security-sealed doors had closed behind us without a sound, and privacy screens now obscured the observation room.

"Please, step up." Dr. Chen said, gesturing toward the chamber's center. Miss Avast remained outside with Kerry, who was pressing her face against the observation window like a worried parent.

"She'll be fine out there; she has a good view of the pond."

"She can't help it," I said and chuckled at her watching a pond. Wait, they had a pond, dang I wanted to see it. "They all worry."

"Rightly so," Dr. Chen said. "What we're attempting today has never been performed on someone with your specific neural architecture. The integration of artificial intelligence with pure human consciousness creates variables we can't fully predict."

I knew that much, but still.... "Your meeting, did it go well?"

"Very well," he admitted, his expression becoming more serious. "She explained your situation in detail."

I glanced around the room.

"Don't worry, this room is completely isolated from all external monitoring systems, with quantum-encrypted communication barriers, and electromagnetic shielding rated for military applications. Anything that happens here stays between us."

"Understood," I said, trying to project more confidence than I felt.

Dr. Chen guided me to a sophisticated medical platform at the room's center. This was not the simple examination chair from our first meeting, but something that looked like it belonged on a starship bridge. My mind drifted back to the Faulkner and I smiled. My ship.

The platform adjusted automatically to my height and weight as I settled onto it, conforming to my body's contours with unsettling precision.

Around me, banks of neural monitors activated with soft chimes, their holographic displays casting shifting patterns of light across surfaces. The scanning sequence started immediately, real-time neural pathway mapping materializing above me like a three-dimensional constellation of light and shadow.

My damaged brain hung in the air before us, rendered in painful detail—dark voids where the tumors had been removed, severed connections glowing red, and the strange, impossible pathways where Doli had integrated herself into my consciousness.

"It looks bad, doesn't it?" I asked, watching the 3D hologram spin as Dr. Chen moved carefully around me, checking all the connections.

"I won't lie to you, Mr. Smith. It is the worst case I've ever come across. The fact that you're even conscious is a small miracle."

His honesty was both reassuring and terrifying. "Worst case, ever?"

"Yes," Dr. Chen paused in his preparations, meeting my eyes directly. "I don't expect you to trust me yet, not completely. But I've been treating fugitives for almost thirty years now. Your case isn't the first, though it is the most complex. I hope my work here, with you and your friends, will demonstrate my commitment to your cause."

My pulse quickened. "You're willing to perform facial reconstruction surgery as well?"

"Your friends are scheduled for procedures this afternoon," he confirmed. "Miss Avast will assist while I focus on your neural reconstruction. Dr. Valde will observe both procedures. She's earned the right to oversee every aspect of your care."

"And then surgery on Kerry?" Fuck I'd let her name slip.

"When I've completed this morning's task, I am going to help transform your doctor into a new woman."

"What about me?"

"Any facial modification for you will have to wait until your neural pathways stabilize. The nanite reconstruction takes priority—without it, cosmetic surgery becomes irrelevant."

I felt Doli's presence shift within my mind, her attention focusing on the conversation.

"A quick scan through Cali's medical databases gave me more than enough information to understand your situation before Dr. Valde contacted me," Dr. Chen continued, his voice dropping to a more confidential tone. "Former Elite Razors Academy neural interface program. Experimental AI integration. Wanted by Braker Corporation for reasons that go beyond simple desertion."

The room fell silent except for the sound of the equipment. I studied Dr. Chen's face, looking for any sign of deception or hidden agenda.

"You're taking considerable risks helping us," I said finally.

"We're all taking risks," he replied. "The question is whether those risks serve a purpose worth the cost."

"You're really all in? Aren't you?"

He actually put a hand on my shoulder then and looked me in the eyes. I felt a little odd seeing a man up this close with his soul bared. "Son," he said. "I'm being frank here."

"Can I be Bill?"

He laughed and gave me a light squeeze, guiding me toward the center of the room. "I have a lot of questions still, and a lot of things…. well things I'd like to get off my chest. I'm all in, and you, we have to get you better first, right?"

Understanding passed between us, and I smiled feeling more confident in his ability and my own than I had before. "Yes, Doctor."

He then returned to his task: "The nanites are now programmed with your specific neural mapping data. They'll target damaged pathways and begin creating new connections where necessary. The process will be more intensive than yesterday's preliminary treatment."

<<Permission requested to establish external monitoring connection,>> Doli asked.

"Dr. Chen," I said. "Doli would like to interface with your systems to watch everything."

"Of course," he replied, activating a specialized terminal. "Her participation is essential for our success here. I will have questions for her as we proceed."

"The integration rate appears aggressive," Doli said over the comms. "Neural restructuring usually requires longer intervals between sessions."

"Conventional neural restructuring, yes," Dr. Chen agreed without looking up from his calibrations. "But we're not simply rebuilding damaged pathways. We're creating an optimized architecture that incorporates both human neural patterns and artificial intelligence integration."

"Sounds good," I said. "Don't understand all of it."

"I know, I'll look after you. But you'll experience significant disorientation," Dr. Chen continued, approaching with a neural interface crown more complex than anything I'd seen before. "Possibly vivid memories, sensory distortions, or temporary dissociation. This is normal as dormant neural pathways reactivate."

The crown settled over my head, cool metal points pressing against my temples and the base of my skull. I felt a momentary panic.

"And now," Dr. Chen said, turning to a separate console, "we'll establish direct monitoring of your AI companion."

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I watched as Dr. Chen connected a specialized interface directly to the small external component of Doli's system. His hand paused for half a second. Not fear, curiosity. Like he'd touched a live wire and wanted to feel it again.

"Fascinating architecture," he murmured, studying the readings. "Self-evolving protocols, adaptive integration pathways... this work is truly remarkable and not by any means standard technology."

"No," I agreed. "She was designed for something else entirely."

Dr. Chen's fingers paused over his controls. "Fleet command and control systems. Tactical coordination across multiple vessels simultaneously." It wasn't a question, he was reading the technical specifications directly from Doli's architecture.

"And now she's keeping me alive," I said.

"More than that," Dr. Chen observed. "She's fundamentally altering your neural development. This integration isn't parasitic, it's symbiotic. You're both evolving."

"Is that dangerous?" I asked though I suspected I already knew the answer.

"All transformative technology carries risk," Dr. Chen replied. "But the alternative, continued degradation, is certain death. Our job is to harness the potential while mitigating the dangers."

He stepped back, surveying the completed preparations. "System diagnostics complete. Neural mapping confirmed. Nanite programming verified. Are you both ready to begin?"

"Ready," Doli and I replied in unison.

The initialization sequence started with a soft vibration through my bones. On the displays above me, the nanite delivery system engaged, sending a controlled pulse of microscopic machines into my bloodstream. I tasted metal at the back of my throat and felt a crawling sensation beneath my skin.

"Neural response within expected parameters," Dr. Chen reported, his attention fixed on multiple data streams. "Initial integration commencing in the temporal region. Nanite distribution rate: 2.3 million units per minute."

Dr. Chen focused on the holographic brain hovering above me. Points of light developed within the damaged portions, resembling stars in a dark sky. "The nanites are mapping active pathways first, establishing baseline connections before attempting reconstruction."

The discomfort grew as the nanites spread, and a strange pressure developed behind my eyelids. I held the platform's edges and concentrated on taking calm breaths.

"Heart rate elevated to 95 beats per minute," Doli reported through the speakers. <<Piotr, try to regulate your breathing. The nanites respond to stress hormones—elevated cortisol levels could disrupt their programming.>>

"Trying," I said between gritted teeth. The pressure was getting painful, bright, and acute.

Above me, the damaged sections of my neural map were increasingly illuminated, glowing pathways spreading like luminescent veins through the holographic display. It was beautiful and terrifying, watching my own mind being reconstructed in real-time.

"Integration proceeding 23% faster than projected models," Dr. Chen observed, his clinical fascination evident. "Your neural tissue is remarkably receptive to nanite programming. Synaptic response time has improved by 8% in the past four minutes."

The pain crested suddenly, then receded, replaced by a strange floating sensation. The room wavered around me, colors intensifying before gradually fading. I drifted, my consciousness pulled away from the treatment chamber into something deeper.

I was now in one of the Academy's simulation rooms. Yet, the neural interface chair seemed so very cold against my back; its restraints secure but not uncomfortable. Across from me, another chair held Ashley, her hair pulled back, eyes closed in concentration as she navigated the shared mental landscape we were building.

Her eyes opened, finding mine across the room. "You're pushing too hard against the parameters," she says, but her lips don't move. The words were in my mind, almost like she was here today, but I knew she wasn't. "Let the system guide you."

"It feels strange today," I responded. "Different. Like the boundaries are... thinner."

Ashley tilts her head, a gesture so characteristically hers that my chest ached with recognition. "That's because this isn't a simulation, Piotr."

The room shifts around us, the clean lines of the Academy blurring. "What do you mean?"

"You're in treatment. Nanite reconstruction." She then stands, moving toward me with a fluid grace that defies the restraints that should be holding her. "But part of you is here, with me."

"This isn't real," I insist, though doubt creeps in. "You're gone. I saw the footage. You locked yourself in that vault with Macks."

She smiles, sad and knowing. "Yes. I did."

"Then how—"

"Neural echoes," she now stands directly before me. "Fragments of connection. The nanites are finding pathways neither of us knew existed." She reaches out, her fingers almost touching my face. "There's something you need to know about Cali. About the north shore facility. We never discussed it, but—"

I gasped, the treatment room snapping back into focus as alarms blared around me. My body arched involuntarily, muscles seizing as pain lanced through my head.

"Neural patterns destabilizing," someone called out. "Severe fluctuation in the temporal region."

Trait Progression: Hybrid Neural Architecture Foundation – 42% ↑

Trigger: Successful nanite integration beginning structural brain reconstruction

Function: Learning to operate with artificial enhancement systems

Risk: Personality drift possible; memory cascade instability

Trait Progression: Medical Transformation Acceptance – 89% ↑

Trigger: Embracing experimental neural reconstruction despite life-threatening crisis

Function: Psychological adaptation to fundamental biological changes

Risk: Loss of human identity; over-reliance on artificial enhancement

Dr. Chen moved fast, his fingers flying. "Implementing emergency stabilization protocols. Reducing nanite activity by 40% and redirecting processing load."

"Heart rate dangerously elevated," Doli reported. "Respiratory function compromised."

My body arched involuntarily, muscles seizing as competing signals raced through my reconstructed neural pathways. The holographic display above me was flashing red, showing cascading failures throughout my brain's architecture.

"The dormant pathways are activating too quickly," Dr. Chen said. "His mind is creating connections that shouldn't exist yet." He switched to a specialized console. "Initiating targeted suppression of the hyperactive regions."

Doli's voice broke through the pandemonium, both in my head and through the external speakers. <<Memory pathways that were previously unavailable are now being activated through neural regeneration. Trying to stabilize.>>

As the nanites adjusted to the new programming, the pain subsided and was replaced with a faint throb. As my brain patterns stabilized, the red portions on the holographic display above faded to orange and then yellow.

"Remarkable," Dr. Chen said, reviewing the data streams with obvious fascination. "The AI interface is actively directing nanite behavior, creating real-time modifications to their programming. I've never seen anything like this level of symbiotic integration."

I blinked, and the room slowly came back into focus. The metallic taste in my mouth had grown stronger, coating my tongue like I had been sucking on old coins. "What... happened?" My voice sounded unusual to me, somewhat distorted.

"A stronger than expected response to the nanite integration," Dr. Chen explained, checking my pupillary response with a small light. "Your dormant neural pathways activated much more rapidly than anticipated."

"How do you feel?" Doli asked

I took a moment to assess my condition. The chronic pain that had been my constant companion for weeks had receded significantly, replaced by a different kind of discomfort, sharper but more localized. When I experimentally moved my fingers, they responded with greater precision than I'd experienced since the Academy.

"Different," I said finally. "Better in some ways, but... fundamentally changed."

Dr. Chen nodded, making detailed notes on his tablet. "The nanites have established preliminary connections in your motor control regions, which explains the improved response. However, the treatment has also activated memory pathways we didn't expect to encounter."

He helped me adjust to a semi-reclined position and handed me a cup of water. I accepted it gratefully, only to grimace at the first sip. "Tastes like I've been chewing on a broken power coupling, though."

"Sensory recalibration," Dr. Chen explained. "Your taste receptors are processing signals differently as neural pathways reconstruct. The effect should normalize within 48 to 72 hours."

"Neural reconstruction has activated pathways previously categorized as non-functional," Doli reported, her voice carrying a subtle undertone I couldn't interpret. "Integration efficiency has improved by 31% since the procedure began. However, the memory cascade suggests we're accessing neural architecture that may not be entirely your own."

Dr. Chen's expression sharpened at this information. "Explain."

"The activated memory engrams contain sensory data and cognitive patterns that don't match standard human neural development. Some appear to be shared experiences, possibly from extended neural interface sessions with other individuals."

I felt a chill of recognition. The vision of Ashley hadn't been a hallucination or a dream—it had been something else entirely. "Shared consciousness," I said quietly.

"Precisely," Dr. Chen confirmed. "Extended neural interface sessions can create quantum entanglement between consciousness patterns. What you experienced was likely a genuine connection to residual neural patterns from someone you shared deep interface sessions with."

The implications hit me like cold water. If Ashley's consciousness had somehow become entangled with mine during our Academy training, then her death might not have severed that connection completely.

"Doctor," I said, struggling to organize my thoughts, "the information I received during the cascade—about Cali's north shore facility. Could that be accurate?"

Dr. Chen was quiet for a long moment, his expression becoming carefully neutral. "What specifically did you learn?"

"That it's a Braker research installation. Neural interface experimentation."

The silence stretched uncomfortably before Dr. Chen spoke. "Your treatment is complete for today. We'll need to monitor your recovery carefully before determining the schedule for future sessions."

He was deflecting, but I was too exhausted to push further. The remainder of the recovery period passed in a blur of tests and observations—reaction time assessments, memory function evaluations, and sensory recalibration measurements.

By the time I was transferred to a private recovery room, my body felt simultaneously stronger and alien, as though the nanites had replaced my blood with something more conductive, more responsive.

Kerry soon found me, dismissing Miss Avast. The room was dimly lit and quiet except for the soft hum of machines tracking my vital signs.

"How are you feeling?" she asked, settling into a chair beside my bed.

"Like someone rewired my brain while I was watching," I replied honestly.

"I was watching, it was..."

"Something else?"

She nodded and went silent.

"How are the guys?" I asked. "Surgery?"

"It went very well, extremely good."

"Are they that different?"

"Yes, very. But they still look like them, if that's even possible."

I smiled. "I'm sure it is."

Dr. Chen entered a moment later. "We should really get to your surgery," he said. "Miss Avast and I will watch all four of you through the night."

"Okay," Kerry said, she leaned over me, giving me a little hug and I squeezed her tight. "You okay?"

"Never thought I'd change my face."

Me neither," I replied. "Worth it, right?"

"A new start, yes." She pushed back from me. "You should rest."

She adjusted something on one of the monitors. "I'll sleep when you're stable."

We lapsed into a comfortable silence, broken only by the occasional beep from the monitoring equipment. Outside the window, Cali's artificial night cycle had begun, and the station's lighting dimmed to mimic dusk.

I lay awake, noticing unusual feelings in my body. The nanites continued their job, tiny machines rewiring my neurological circuits in accordance with a sophisticated plan. The metallic taste persisted in my mouth, and my vision intermittently blurred before sharpening to extraordinary clarity.

<<Piotr, Kerry is out of surgery,>> she said, her voice soft. <<It went well, she's in recovery.>>

I stared at the ceiling, "Good, I can sleep now."

Sleep, I did.

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