"Reader comments?! Hell yeah! I haven't seen one in days. I wonder if they've already forgotten about me…"

"Not yet," Big Boss replies in a lazy tone.

"NOT YET?! Does that mean if I stay here too long they will?" I panic, my heart pounding harder than usual. Why do I feel so jittery and so full of energy today…

"Just read and reply to the comments."

"Right…" I slide off the bed and walk through the dark hallways. With my readers beside me, I feel braver exploring this place. Still, it's way too big for one—or even two—people to live in.

"Let's see… who's first…" My eyes light up. "Ah, so many comments from ObservantReader. I need at least ten chapters to reply to every single one. Thank you… you're the best…" I whisper, hoping only you can hear it.

I decide to start with people I haven't seen before. Whoa, so many new faces. So cool.

I scroll through the system screen and step into a small room, then shut the door immediately. It's full of torture devices. Yeah, I'm not going in there.

Anyway, first comment of the day:

[Ash_The_Lost_Soul commented on chapter 29: {woah, it would be awesome to rosy and powder reaction to status windows haha ( if they get one ) you give right 🥺?}]

Who's Rosy? I wonder. "OH—Roxy, ahaha." I'll have to call her that from now on. Wonder how she'll react.

Well, I'll try that once I'm out of here. If I ever get out… But it would be so cool if both of them could also see their own system windows. If you've got any ideas, let me know how I should design it! Thank you for your comment, and I hope to see you more often in my system window.

I slowly move to the next room. The smell is horrible. Are there dead bodies piled in here? What is this place? I step inside cautiously—and freeze. A mountain of bones is stacked in the corner.

"I only hope this won't be my fate…" I mutter, slamming the door shut and vowing never to enter that room again.

Sorry, I got carried away. "Let's see who's next."

[atamix commented on chapter 1: {nice to meet you young blood, i am the white plauge, otherwise known amongst other titles, such as, the rizzler, sucker of titties, mountain shaker and my proudest title i carry till day....bullshit yapper.}]

Yo! Nice to meet you, man of culture. But chapter one is so far away… I wonder how long it'll take you to see my reply. Also, you sound like a cool adventurer. Are you from a world like mine? You're too powerful—shaking a mountain? That's a feat even Glorius couldn't manage, I bet.

Man, I wish I could see your world. Sounds like you could take me on an adventure not only through the land but through the cities as well, if you know what I mean. Wink.

Anyway, before I get smacked on the head by some readers, I'd better move on and calm my pants down.

As I walk around reading comments, I stumble into a light-filled room. Very interesting! Inside, there are countless plants—no way, in this place? And on the ceiling… is that a shining gem or something? It's so bright I could go blind if I stare too long. So this is where the vegetables came from?

Only now do I notice the room feels much larger than it should. Way larger. At least as big as my own fields… WHAT? What kind of magic is this? I should ask Death how it works. If I use my author powers, maybe I could create a space like this too. I tried during my battle with Glorius, but back then it was nowhere near this size…

Ahem. I almost forgot—sorry. Let me read another comment.

[Spicy_Lasangua (Number 1 hater) commented on chapter 17: {Im sorry Powder this is obviously an abuse of power by Quill I'll make him pay for this one }]

Oh, this was from the time I changed Powder's memory, right? Hehehe… I'm sorry, it was necessary, I swear… well, maybe just a little bit. Please don't punish me for that! I'll give Powder one reward based on your suggestion—how about that as compensation to calm your wrath? Sounds good? I'll wait for your next comment.

I pause for a moment. It feels so good to see reader comments again after so long… I missed you all.

That reminds me—I need to update my comment ranking. I mean, I already know who number one is, obviously, but I wonder how things have shifted. Sadly, I can't do that right now, since that feature isn't accessible to me. This month is going to be a long one… isn't it…

I pick up a red fruit-like vegetable and bite into it. Maybe Death won't mind. It's juicy, sweet, and absolutely delicious. Wow. I love it.

As I munch on my new snack, I spot a comment from the reader who sent me cola.

Oh! This person is amazing. Let's see what you have to say…

So many comments! And most of them are just "More chapters!" Hahha! I'll try my best to produce more!

Hmm… most of these comments are in moving-drawing format… I'm just so glad my chapters make you laugh, Milo4more.

[Milo4more commented on chapter 32: {Lol create armor to become growth type.. Including weapons. Both armor and weapon is a set that is soul bound to its owner. That grows with its owner.

Weapons can later manifest and ego. This is just for the three of them. Any new people that comes into the group rewrite only gets normal armor and weapon... Like the warning said in the previous chapters you don't want to give your enemies powers that could later be used Against you.

Unless you write to make sure that any new members that join the rewrite group will have absolute loyalty to you "The Author" forever.}]

Nice idea! I'll be glad to use it if it's declared the quest winner. Also… I'm not that trusting… maybe a little bit… okay, you got me there, I trust too much. I only hope my new members will stay loyal to me. But even if not, I guess it's not a problem—I could always use my author powers to plant a seed in them that makes them loyal forever… but is that right? Ah, who cares, right?

Now… the GOAT.

Man, I think my mana only grows because of you at this point. You must have left at least a hundred comments by now, ObservantReader.

[ObservantReader commented on chapter 32: {ALRIGHT! CULT TIME!}]

Hey! I was joking! But if you really mean it… then sure, build me a church, haha! I can already picture you in priest robes, preaching about the great Quill religion. Maybe even gathering some followers of your own to help spread the word.

I almost drop my snack from laughing so hard. My belly hurts… Quill's cult… ahhh, that's a good one. I approve.

What else have you got for me? It's so hard to choose…

[ObservantReader commented on chapter 32: {whatever do you mean? Powder is def innocent 😇}]

Yeah, sure… so much innocence. If he's innocent, then I'm a saint! I roll my eyes, not buying it for a second. If Powder knew about you, I bet you two would be best friends…

I chuckle at the thought.

"Quill!?" Suddenly, a familiar voice pulls my attention. Death? She's back already?

"Time to go! Hope you had fun." Big Boss vanishes, and my system screen fades with him. No! I was having so much fun… too early… way too early…

"I'm here!" I shout back and rush off to see what she needs. Hopefully she has a ticket back home, because I miss my friends and powers too much.

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